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This series is getting better and better.... and more and more infuriating.

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A few years ago I was asked to mentor a young woman in an adult back-to-college program at a public university in VT whose final portfolio for her teacher certification program had been rejected.

I'm only a HS graduate myself (about a year's worth of CUNY credits from nearly 50 years ago), but I'd had over 30 stories published in paying and non-paying online webzines plus a number of non-fiction pieces on the craft of writing in an online blog (Flash Fiction Chronicles, now defunct), and I'd offered to help this girl for free. Temperamentally she was everything you'd hope for in an elementary school teacher--genuinely interested in the wellbeing and success of kids in a fairly low-income area; a good ability to listen and observe; a drive to discover strategies to help children with more than usual challenges. And she had intelligence and common sense.

But by God her own basic literacy and writing skills were scary to contemplate. And she was terribly frustrated because her professor hadn't pointed out any areas needing strengthening until she found her portfolio rejected with no roadmap as to how she might repair its deficiencies.

(I must say I was quite surprised to find myself displaying a natural aptitude for helping someone learn to spot and understand deficiencies in writing and structure so she could fix them herself. I never saw that coming!)

I don't know the result. I was quite pleased to see the improvement in her work but she never contacted me to tell me the result. I emailed her a few times but she never responded, and I hope it wasn't because she'd received another rejection. It seemed, from what she'd told me, that this was just another stream-of-revenue program for the school with no concern about actual student success.

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